Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Model Caesar Essay

D. Sellers
English 10 Adv (A)
April 16, 2008
The Character of Julius Caesar
Julius Caesar is so renowned as a Roman general that Brutus calls him “the foremost man of all this world” (IV. iii. 24). He has returned to Rome from a successful venture into Europe in which he has defeated his political enemies. Extremely popular among the people of Rome, “He possesse[s] innate talent, charisma, ambition, and luck, which, when combined, allow[s] his political power to increase.” In fact, he is about to be crowned king. But a number of the Senators, led my Cassius, Casca, and eventually Brutus, believe that giving the crown to Caesar is tantamount to giving him absolute power, and they are determined to stop him, even if they must kill him to do so (“About Julius Caesar”). Caesar is neither an entirely good man nor an evil one; rather, he is a man who has his strengths and his weakness. Shakespeare’s development of Caesar’s character is based on what other characters, notably Cassius and Brutus, say about him, how he interacts with his wife, and, most important, what Caesar says about himself.
In the early scenes of the play, Cassius explains that Caesar is just as mortal as himself and Brutus. He recounts how Caesar had lost a swimming race and needed saving and also how Caesar had a seizure when he was in Spain. He is incredulous that he saved Caesar from drowning and that “this man has now become a god/And Cassius is a wretched creature” (I. ii. 115-17). Brutus, on the other hand, is less envious of Caesar but more concerned about his potential to become a tyrant. He believes that Caesar must be stopped before it is too late and he becomes dangerous: “He would be crowned/How that might change his nature, there’s the question/…./And therefore think him as a serpent’s egg/…/And kill him in the shell” (II. i. 10-35).
Another side of Caesar’s character is revealed in the scene in which Calpurnia, having had ominous dreams, warns him not to go to the Capitol that day. In one sense, Caesar shows himself to be brave, as indeed he has proven in battle many times: “Cowards die many times before their deaths;/The valiant never taste of death but once” (III. i. 32-33). Yet when Decius contradicts Calpurnia’s interpretation of the dream and suggests that the Senators intend to offer Caesar the crown, Caesar’s desire to be king gets the better of his desire to appease Calpurnia, and he goes, saying somewhat callously to her, “How foolish do your fears seem now, Calpurnia!/I am ashamed I did yield to them” (II. ii. 105-6). Caesar is indeed brave and devoted to his wife, but his political ambition trumps everything.
Finally, and most revealing, is what Caesar says about himself. Early in the play he establishes his sense of self importance and majesty when he tells Antony, “I rather tell what is to be feared/Than what I fear; for always I am Caesar” (I. ii. 211-12). But even more telling are the comments he makes in the Capitol immediately before his assassination. In perhaps one last effort to justify not killing Caesar, several of the senators petition him to rescind his banishment of one of the senator’s brother. Caesar’s reply is so unreasonable, so condescending, that it becomes clear that the senators’ fears are justified and that Caesar must die. Caesar refuses to even consider the petition because he regards himself as infallible simply by virtue of being Caesar: “Know, Caesar doth not wrong, nor without cause/Will he be satisfied” (III. i. 47-48). His pride has reached its pinnacle, and he now thinks himself a god among mere mortals:
I could be well moved, if I were as you;
If I could pray to move, prayers would move me;
But I am constant as the Northern Star,
Of whose true-fixed and resting quality
There is n o fellow in the firmament. (III. i. 58-62)
And he goes even a step farther in referring to himself directly as a god when he commands: “Hence! Wilt thou lift up Olympus?” (III. i. 75).
Julius Caesar, the foremost man of his time, was a man, not a god. Essentially he was neither better nor worse than most men, except that he made the fatal mistake of letting his pride get the better of his judgment and his humanity. And for that he paid the ultimate price.


















Works Cited
“About Julius Caesar.” GradeSaver. 16 April 2008

Monday, April 14, 2008

Essay notes

ASSIGNMENT

Write an essay on the way in which Caesar’s character is depicted by 1) what others say about him, notably Cassius and Brutus, 2) what his interaction with his wife reveals, and 3) how Caesar’s words and actions right before the assassination (Act III, Scene i) show his true nature.

FORMAT

Double spaced

12 point font

MLA parenthetical citations


PLAN OF DEVELOPMENT

Introduction

One or two paragraph paraphrase of a research source. Put a parenthetical citation at the end of the paragraph.

Body

What Cassius and Brutus say about Caesar (1 or 2 paragraphs)

What is revealed about Caesar in the scene with his wife (1 or 2 paragraphs)

What Caesar reveals about himself in III. i. (1 or 2 paragraphs)

Conclusion – 1 paragraph









PARENTHETICAL CITATIONS

Placed in the text after what is being cited.

Quotations

Paraphrase

Include author’s name (if there is one) and page number (if there is one)

If no author, then give the title of the article, not Sparknotes

Julius Caesar is introduced in the play as victorious leader of Rome just returned from conquering Gaul. Although he is very popular among the people, it is feared by some of the Senators, notable Cassius and Brutus, that he may become king and revoke their privileges as the governing body of Rome. Introduced early in the play as a great but arrogant leader who fears nothing, Caesar is warned by his wife Calphurnia not to go to the Senate on the "ides of March" the very day he is assassinated. His character is a complex one, revealed by what other characters say about him, how he interacts with his wife, and what he says about himself (Tillyard 64).

Works Cited
Tillyard, E.M.W. “Julius Caesar.” Absolute Shakespeare. New York:
Harper and Row, 2008.
“Julius Caesar.” Absolute Shakespeare. New York: Harper and Row, 2008.
“Julius Caesar.” Absolute Shakespeare. 12 April 2008.



… the "ides of March" the very day he is assassinated. His character is a complex one, revealed by what other characters say about him, how he interacts with his wife, and what he says about himself (“Julius Caesar” 29).

… the "ides of March" the very day he is assassinated. His character is a complex one, revealed by what other characters say about him, how he interacts with his wife, and what he says about himself (“Julius Caesar”).
Parenthetical citations for lines from Shakespeare:
(I.i.1-15)
As Caesar and his followers return from the Lupercal, Cassius tries to discover Brutus’ feelings about Caesar’s ambition. Brutus somewhat reluctantly says that he is afraid that the people want to make Caesar king, which prompts Cassius to reply, “Ay, do you fear it? /Then I must think you would not have it so” (I.ii.80-81). Clearly, Cassius himself would not have Caesar crowned, for he thinks Caesar is pathetically weak and even recounts an incident in which Caesar almost drowned in a swimming contest and later cried out for water when he was ill. “And this man is now become a god?” Cassius asks incredulously (I. ii. 115-16).

Thursday, March 20, 2008

Graded assignments due as of today

JC, Act I
Vocab 3.1
Sentence errors 3.1
Benchmark
Sentence errors 3.2
Vocab 3.2
JC Acts I & II
Glossary of usage
Requiz: sentence errors (optional)
Essay on change
JC, true/ false
Vocab 3.4
Vocab 3.5
Vocab 3.7
JC Famous line

The Julius Caesar essay is due on the first class day after Spring Break

Wednesday, March 19, 2008

Julius Caesar essay

Introduction (w/ at least one quotation and one paraphrased passage, each w/ a parenthetical citation)

Body

  • Caesar as depicted by Cassius and Brutus
  • Caesar interacting w/ his wife
  • Caesar in public (after the Lupercal and before his assassination)

Conclusion

Thursday, February 14, 2008

Graded assignments

As of today, your grade is based on the following assignments: Vocab 3.1, Sentence Errors 3.1, Sentence Errors 3.2, Julius Caesar, Act I, Benchmark, and the Multi-paragraph Essay.

Vocab quiz 3.2 has been deferred until Tuesday, Feb. 17/Wednesday Feb. 18.

There will be a quiz on Julius Caesar, II.ii - be sure you have prepared your summary

Thursday, February 7, 2008

Assessments and Assignments

As of today, your grade is based on four assessments: Vocab Quiz 3.1, Sentence Errors Quiz 3.1, Julius Caesar Act I, and the Benchmark.

There is an essay assignment due on Monday, Feb. 11 (A day) or Tuesday, Feb 12 (B day). Here it is:

Write an essay of at least four paragraphs on change - something that needs changing, sonething that has chaged, changes in your life so far, changes in your life that you anticipate.....